Objective Narration Example
Writings / / July 04, 2021
The objective storytelling It is the narration in which the narrator speaks of something that he sees but in which he does not participate. He just talks, just like television narrators, who are watching things but not participating in them.
They can talk about things that are happening or things that just happened or happened before.
It is essential that you know the facts first hand, otherwise it would not be an objective narrative.
Thus they can be taken into consideration as an objective narrative:
- Testimony or
- Sports commentary
Where the seen is declared but where it is not participated, in addition to the fact that the objective sentence must be fully distinguished from the subjective narration, they are completely opposite.
Example of an objective narration of a soccer game:
Narration of a soccer game.
The star player took to the field with a shoe of each color, with the colors of his team, exalting his presence and intimidating his opponents.
At the start of the game he found his antagonist, the captain of the opposing team, it was Luis Tejada, the player marked with the number 11.
Now José Maldonado "el Gallo" with his colored shoes, was faced with his natural opponent.
Now in the first half, the score remained at zero, facing the rival teams "Los Ángeles de San Carlos" and "Los tucanes de Naucalpan"
But at the start of the second in time the score was baptized with a score from the Angels, who opened the scoring to the first minute of the second half, the agile legs of Luis Tejada crashed the ball into the goal, taking advantage of an oversight by the goalkeeper.
The second annotation was produced again by Luis Tejada who scored at the last minute by taking a corner kick, having surpassed the tall stature of his opponents and showing that skill and courage are more than enough to win such a game important.
Commentator: Ing. León Flipe Carbajo "the cosmic one".
Example of statement and objective narration of an accident:
After I had left the school and took the transport, I could see how the man who was driving the motorcycle climbed onto the sidewalk, losing control of his motorcycle and throwing the newspapers out of the kiosk.
Apparently he did not cause injuries to anyone and it seems that he was not injured, but I do not know if he was a young person or an old person, as he kept his helmet on.
Later, the young woman who sold the newspapers came out and began to curse the driver, because she destroyed all of her stall, ruined many publications and she will need to pay the damages the next day.
A discussion began that lowered its tone when the representative of the motorcyclist's insurance company arrived, who apparently came to a solution, because after a short time the spirits calmed down.
We could not get out of the vehicle nor could he circulate, as the damage covered the space where the bus exited, and when they collected everything we left and I didn't know more.
"Statement made by the student Román Linares G".